This is was supposed to be a short story, according to what its shown as on amazon. I have no idea when I even inquired this book, though most likely it was in an email with deals for that day.
It turned out to be more of a long poem then a short story, It depends on how the reader sees it I suppose. If the age group it is intended for is young, like 5-9, then this is a nice spooky short story for Halloween
That being said, I would give this short story, a 3/5 stars.